Never Underestimate the Power and Value of Good Editing.

                          New-fangled publishing options. 

             Old-fashioned values. 

Just what does that mean? Well, first it's important to point out that anyone who wants to be a published author today can be a published author, what with all the vanity presses in the marketplace and all the self-publishing opportunities that are built into Amazon and other platforms. As a result, literary quality is often compromised because not everyone who jumps aboard one of these new-fangled wagons is a skilled writer. That's where old-fashioned values come in. The values are mine! I believe that anything that is going to be published, regardless of where, when or how, should be as editorially sound--as well-written, comprehensible and pleasant to read--as possible. That's the only way to maintain a level of respect and dignity for the writing profession. 

As a book editor, I will make sure your work is as good as it can be. My editorial skills are verifiable, my professional values unassailable. As Confucius said, "Words are the voice of the heart." Please read on.


Face facts. All authors need professional editing, including bestselling novelists and journalists who
have been at it for decades. That’s just the way it is.

Two groups in particular need professional editing perhaps a little more than others:

  • New authors who have never written a book before;
  • Authors who use a vanity publisher or the Kindle self-publishing program and as a result have limited access to skilled editorial professionals who can check and improve on their output.

It is perfectly natural for authors to see and feel their work so passionately from their own hearts and minds that they fail to see the kinds of problems that many readers will recognize. They get too close to their work—too comfortable. That’s normal. Problems that can creep into even the most skilled literary projects include:

  • Run-on sentences: "As soon as the alarm went off, Jason slid out of bed, took off his pajamas, put on pants and a pullover shirt, stuffed a piece of unbuttered bread down his throat, took two gigantic gulps of milk, and ran out the back door, hoping that Angela had not yet left her own house so that he could 'accidentally' bump into her on the corner of Elm Street and Merchant Avenue, where he planned to use one of the impromptu-sounding speeches he had been working on over the last three days" would be much more effective as three or four separate sentences, each one that could effectively add to the dramatic effect of the story without tiring out the reader;
  • Mixed tenses (past, present): "He saw Angela walking toward him. 'Early enough for you?' he says, hoping she'll find it funny. She smiled, but says nothing" goes back and forth from past tense to present tense four times in three sentences. It is the definition of sloppy writing. "He saw Angela walking toward him. 'Early enough for you?' he said, hoping she would find it funny. She smiled, but said nothing" is the way it should be written;  
  • Misplaced modifiers: "Since he fell fast asleep under the bed, Jim couldn't find his little kitten for hours" is incorrect. The kitten was under the bed, not Jim;
  • Passive as opposed to active voice: "The house, upstairs and downstairs, was cleaned by their remorseful children" is extremely passive and weak. "Their guilt-stricken children cleaned the entire house" is a more active, stronger and compelling way to say it. 
  • Too many ing words at once, which slows down the narrative: "Finally giving in, he began talking about the troubling memories bothering him over the years, which is exactly what his family had been wanting him to do" has five ing words in a single sentence, tediously weighing it down. "He took the hint and spoke freely about all the memories that had irked him for years. That's exactly what they wanted him to do" has no ing words, is shorter, and flows much better;
  • Descriptions and explanations that are familiar to the author but may be unclear to the reader: "So when his bosses found out that he was accepting payola from A&R men and some publicity hounds at the labels, they told him that he could take the first bus back to Cleveland and go back down to 20,000 watts" would be fine--but only if the author had already explained what was meant by payola, A&R, publicity hounds, labels, and 20,000 watts. If, however, those were the first references, many readers would be hopelessly lost, and quite possibly disinterested by that point.  
In essence, good writing is comprised of two elements: the story itself, and the way it is told. This is true for both fiction and nonfiction. You can be a gifted, natural storyteller, but lack the creative tools to tell the story as effective as it can be told (sloppy grammar, punctuation, spelling, and all those bullet points above). Conversely, you can have a firm grip on the language tools, but find your storytelling a bit rambling, choppy and unconvincing. 

My book editing concentrates mostly on the former (grammar, punctuation, spelling, sentence structure, tenses, modifiers, voice, narrative ease, descriptions). It is never my intention to change your story in any way, even if I have an issue with the way it develops, progresses, and concludes. It's your vision. That said, I will use all the tools in my editing arsenal to make sure your vision reads and sounds as smoothly, cogently, impactfully, and professionally as possible.

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"It has been my good fortune to collaborate with Joel as my book editor. He was perfectly attuned to what I was trying to express. He preserved my creative process while giving the work a polished, professional style."
--Gibbs Williams, PhD, New York City Psychotherapist 


"Joel has a magical way with words. I am truly thrilled with his edits! I highly recommend him for any writing or editing projects. He also has a great personality and is very easy to work with."
--Sandra Long, President, Post Road Consulting 

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       There is information below about rates and policies. You can always send an email to 

                             JoeltheWriter@comcast.net to ask any questions at all.   

                                               

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Never underestimate the value of good writing. It turns work that’s just okay into work that is truly powerful. It commands attention. Readers will be drawn in instead of turned away.

  
           Almost anyone can be a good writer—especially if they have a good editor.

Let me share something with you. In addition to editing, I also used to review books for a company called The US Review and I must report to you that the vast majority of self-published books have so many problems with language, punctuation and sentence structure that it became almost impossible for me to give them a good review. Sloppy writing tells me that the author cared only about one thing—the author—and not about the reader. Writers need to go an extra mile (sometimes ten miles!) on behalf of their readers. Otherwise, why even go to the trouble of getting published at all?

                                                

That's me in the photograph above. It shows what I look like (at least when I have advanced notice that someone is going to snap a shot). Obviously, though, it does not show what I can do as an editor. 


Would you like to see of some of the work I’ve edited? Here are some examples from six of my recent book editing projects.

1. "Jerusalem Nights," a novel by a first-time author. 

2. An as-of-yet untitled autobiography by a very successful businessman;

3. "Heaven, Anyone?" a novel by a first-time author;

4. "LinkedIn for Personal Branding," revision of a book written by a marketing expert; 

5. "Smack in the Middle," a memoir by a psychotherapist.

6. "The K5 Conspiracy," an espionage novella by a foreign student.

First you'll see a few paragraphs exactly the way the authors sent them to me. Following that you'll see my edit of those paragraphs. I'll include a few comments about the changes I made, and why I made them. 

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A very successful food entrepreneur wanted to write a novel that addressed his lifelong concern about the ongoing conflict among the world’s three great religions, a conflict revealed daily by the clashes in the Middle East. In "Jerusalem Nights," the author draws on his early life as a young man at a monastery near Nazareth in the 1950s. He is a very good and exceedingly passionate storyteller, but English is neither his first language nor his strongest asset. Below are a few paragraphs from his own first draft.  
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    All villagers on Paros produce tomatoes, cucumbers, onions and feta cheese, for the big summer demand of the famed Xoriatiki, traditional Greek salad. Sheep, pigs and fowl are raised for the long charcoal grills, live fish and octopus stringed on poles for drying in the sun on the shoreline of colorful taverns and cafes. 
    Lefteris and Theana live on a small parcel of land remaining from a very large piece that they inherited from his grandfather, Petros Kaltharas. In recent years due to economic hardships they had to sell most of it,  leaving a small piece with their house and a few olive trees. The earth is nutrient-rich and gives produce its famous flavor and aroma. Although it is hard to work Kalipetra’s rocky soil, it offers subsistence. 
    Kalipetra winters are harsh. Families prepare for the cold by cobbling animal skins with muslin cloth into thick, pliable clothing and footwear retaining the ancient Hellenic traditional styles. Cotton, silk and thread that is finely woven is turned into beautiful apparel to adorn the island’s men, women and children. Hand-woven tapestries adorn the church and insulate the cold walls of their stone homes. More delicate finery of woven cotton, wool, silk and golden thread is used to adorn the beautiful women, men and children.  
    An important contraption in the village is the old stone olive press.  Not only is it a place of work but a source of essential education for the young. They learn the ideal time to pick and bring the olives to the press before the treasured rich flavor can oxidize. Skills are passed down through the generations to maintain their ability to utilize the olive’s gift. Similarly great cheeses are crafted from simple skills derived from ages of practical experience.

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Without sacrificing his voice, tone, style, or passion (which, understandably, he was adamant to hold onto), I tightened his prose with sensible, judicious, professional edits. Below are the same few paragraphs, with my edits. "I am delighted with it," the author told me in an email. "I am amazed with your ability to sense how I wanted to tell the story in my voice, and with how you accomplished to make it flow so well."   

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    The villagers on Paros grow tomatoes, cucumbers, onions and produce feta cheese, all of which are needed to satisfy summer’s demand for Xoriatiki, a locally famous traditional Greek salad. Sheep, pigs and fowl are readied for the charcoal grills, while live fish and octopus are strung up on poles at taverns and cafés to drying in the sun. 
    Lefteris and Theana live on a small parcel of land carved from a larger tract originally  inherited from Lefteris’s grandfather, Petros Kaltharas. Economic hardship in recent years compelled them to sell most of it; just the small piece with their house and some olive trees remains. The earth is nutrient-rich and gives the produce its famous flavor and aroma. Although it is hard to work Kalipetra’s rocky soil, the effort pays off. Subsistence is ensured. 
    The winters are harsh. Families prepare by cobbling animal skins with muslin cloth into thick, pliable clothing and footwear that retain the ancient Hellenic traditional styles. Cotton, silk and thread that is finely woven is turned into beautiful apparel to adorn the island’s men, women and children. Hand-woven tapestries insulate the cold walls of their stone homes, and are also used to embellish the interior of the hallowed local church.  
    One time-honored contraption in the village is the old stone olive press. It represents both essential work and a source of valuable education. Youngsters learn the ideal time to pick the olives and bring them to the press before the treasured rich flavor can oxidize. Skills have been passed down through the generations to enable residents to fully utilize the gift of nature’s olive. Great cheeses, too, are crafted using skills derived from ages of practical experience.

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A well-known and very colorful businessman, eminent in his field of children's education products, provided hours of dictation on many personal topics as the first step of having his life's story turned into a full-length autobiography. His tales, ideas and opinions are quite intriguing indeed, but his top-of-the-head narration is rambling and ill-defined, as far as a cohesive narrative is concerned. Here's a few moments from the original unedited transcription revolving around some activity in which he was involved during college.
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       One of the worst decisions I ever made. John Engler had two hats. Senate majority leader, and candidate for Michigan governor. In a campaign you can’t cross church and state. Anything he did for the Senate had to be independent from the campaign. Money and contributions were the third rail. You had to document all donations, have a budget for donations, couldn’t use campaign money for the senate, and on and on. 
          Dan and Coleen were responsible for separation of church and state. I was on the campaign committee. I was also a political science major. So one thing I desired was to be involved in Engler’s cabinet, if he won the governorship. John Engler would be in a weekly meeting talking about his activities in the Senate. I told Dan I wanted to attend one of those meetings. He laughed at me, only to come back a week later and say that next week, on Thursday night at 6:30, we’re having a cabinet meeting and John has allowed you to attend. 
           I was dating Dani Johnson from Hope College and she wanted to see me on Thursday night, and that was a 3-hour drive, so I entered the Senate cabinet meeting at 6:00, interrupted the meeting and said I had to leave to see my girlfriend. 
           The entire room went quiet. They tilted their heads, said “Go,” and I said thank you. I had no idea of the insult I had generated by being allowed to be in the meeting and then asking to be dismissed so I can see my girlfriend. When I arrived in Grand Rapids, we got in a fight and I didn’t even get laid. It’s a story of listening to my dick. I was a horny guy. So I asked to leave the most important meeting of my life.

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I listened to the transcription to assess--to the extent possible--both his personal style and literary intent. As I began work on this section, I also did some extra research of my own and passed a few follow-up questions his way. Finally, using some creative and judicious editorial license, I crafted the following portion (just one of dozens) as part of this biographical process:  
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           One of the worst decisions I ever made also happened during my time with the Engler campaign. 
            I was working on ways to assure that all monies spent were legitimate and properly accounted for, because in a political campaign, screwing that up is the equivalent of a breach of separation of church and state. Any funds Engler spent, or earned, as a senator had to be entirely independent from the gubernatorial campaign, and well documented. Contributions are the third rail in a political campaign. His campaign managers, Dan and Coleen Pero, were responsible for that separation—for avoiding that third rail—and it was a topic often discussed in campaign meetings. 
            Now, I was a political science major at the time, and had visions of being in Engler’s cabinet, if he won the governor’s seat. So I told Dan that even though I was an intern, I wanted to sit in on one of the meetings. At first, he laughed at me. That was humbling. But a week later he came over to me and said, “Jonathan, next Thursday night. Six-thirty. Campaign meeting. Senator Engler said you could attend. Be there.” 
            During this time, I was dating a girl from Hope named Dani, and she wanted to see me. When? Next Thursday night. Six-thirty. 
             Hope was a three-hour drive, but I really did want to see Dani, because I was in that kind of mood, if you know what I mean. So in the late afternoon I entered the Senate room where Engler’s meeting was to take place, interrupted whoever was talking, and announced that I had to skip the meeting in order to see my girlfriend. The entire room went silent. Everyone tilted their heads, almost comically (in retrospect, pitifully), and someone said “Go.” So I went. 
              I had no idea at the time of the insult I had perpetrated on the entire Engler team by first being given permission to attend the meeting, and then saying I wanted to skip it to see my girlfriend. What’s more, when I arrived at Dani’s place, we got into a fight, and if there was any sex in Michigan that night, I had nothing to do with it.
              Looking back, it’s a sad morality tale of listening to carnal urges and ignoring common sense. Thanks to being horny, I skipped out on the most important meeting of my life.

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This is from "Heaven, Anyone," a not-yet-published novel by a first-timer named John Yates, whose daytime profession is as a designer of kitchens and bathrooms. John's story, loosely based on fact, concerns a group of college students in the Nineteen Seventies who find themselves in a bit of hot water. These paragraphs are directly from the author’s original manuscript, before I began the editing process.

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       It was Wednesday night and after dinner it was quiet in suite 703. Tommy was listening to Jimi Hendrix with his headphones on and the others were doing homework with their doors open. The silence was interrupted by a loud banging on the outer suite door next to the lounge. Even Tommy sat bolt upright on his bed. Who the heck could that be? he thought.
       “Campus Police,” yelled a man’s voice from the outer hallway. Tommy froze solid. Sam and Ben got right up and went to the door.
       “Hi, come in,” said Sam, pointing into the lounge and ushering in two young men and a young woman with light blue-gray shirts and navy pants.
       “How ya doing,” said the first man in. “We’re assisting the Amherst Police Department with their ongoing investigation of the death of the Amherst College student, who died this past weekend. I’m sure you heard about it, as it’s been all over the news. He was attacked along with another student a few weeks ago in Amherst and, unfortunately, he died after being in a coma since the incident.”

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I felt as if the mood established here was not quite what the author was trying to convey. So I repositioned a few lines and tightened others to try to achieve that mood. I revised some quotes to give them a stronger relationship to real people talking the way real people talk. Finally, there are certain literary choices one can make (adjective selection; cut-off sentences, etc.) in order to give a written scene the drama and emotion it deserves. Many of those choices were lacking in the original. I included them in the revision below: 
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       There wasn’t a sound in Suite 703. It was late Wednesday night and the boys just finished their dinner and had retired to their separate bedrooms. Tommy was resting on his bed listening to Jimi Hendrix with his headphones on, while the other sighed over their homework by their desks. The silence was interrupted by a loud banging on the suite door, from the hallway. Even Tommy, in a headphone daze of his own, sat upright on his bed when he heard the noise, wondering, as did they all, who was at the door. They hadn’t been expecting anyone.
       “Campus police,” came the response from the other side of the door—from someone with a deep voice. Tommy did not move, but Sam and Ben left their rooms and went straight to the door. Sam opened it. Standing there were a middle-aged man and a younger woman, both wearing light blue shirts and navy slacks.
       “Hi, come in,” Sam said, pointing toward the suite’s lounge. He led the way.
       “How you doing?” said the man, with little if any emotion in his voice. “We’re assisting the Amherst Police Department with their investigation into the attack of that Amherst College student. I’m sure you heard about it.”
       “Well…” began Sam, “yes, we heard something about it, but—”
       “He's dead,” the man starkly interrupted. “He was in a coma, but he died." 
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Here are a few paragraphs from a book about how to effectively use LinkedIn to help grow a business or organization. It will be an updated version of a previously-published book written by Sandra Long, a distinguished marketing consultant and proven expert in the field. Here’s one section from Sandra's original draft of the update:

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Just Imagine: Bill and Mark

       Just imagine Bill walks into a networking event or party. He heads straight to the food table. Bill keeps talking and spewing out his sales pitch. To top it off, a lot of his topics revolve around him.
       Now imagine his cousin Mark, who enters the room and shows authentic interest in others. He engages other people with interesting conversation.
       The cousins are starkly different in their approaches. Mark attracts people and prospects while Bill repels them. Please know that the online world is no different than real life. Your job is to be like Mark, and attract people to you. The trick is to be helpful and genuinely interested in others.
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The rhythm and structure of the original sometimes tended to give the impression of being a stream-of-consciousness speech by the author. There are many times an approach like is entirely appropriate; a serious business book may not always be one of them. I kept Sandra's specific narrative exactly as she had it, but fine-tuned it with as professional and as consistent a tone as possible. I also changed the subhead, which seemed to beg for something a little more intriguing--perhaps more literary. The author was appreciative of the choice. Here's my revision.
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A Tale of Two Cousins


       Imagine Bill walking into a networking event. He heads straight to the food table, then starts to spew his sales pitch, and never comes up for air. Everything he says revolves around himself.
       Now imagine his cousin Mark, who enters the room and shows authentic interest in all the other people at the event. He engages them with interesting conversation.
       These two cousins take starkly different approaches. As a result, Bill repels and Mark attracts. Here’s a big secret: the online world is no different. So make it your job to be like Mark, not Bill. The key is to be helpful and genuinely interested in others.
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FIVE

Here are a few paragraphs from the first draft of a book called "Smack in the Middle: My Turbulent Time Treating Heroin Addicts at Odyssey House," by Gibbs Williams, Ph.D. It is a memoir of the author's harrowing experience early in his career, and his draft was based on his own decades-old notes and diaries. This is part of his original submission to me, exactly as he wrote it:  
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       Today’s group of potential inductees consisted of six scruffy men and four dejected women, all hard core heroin addicts, ranging in age from twenty to thirty, of mixed nationalities – three Puerto Ricans, four whites, and three blacks.
       I immediately focused on a tall, emaciated black man named Tyrone, about twenty years old, noting a surprisingly instant rapport, despite our many obvious differences: his blackness, my whiteness; his tallness, my shortness; his lower class background, my upper middle class background; his lack of formal education, my life-long immersion in it.
       “Tyrone, what motivated you to come here today?” Staring at me blankly, he remained mute. Clutching, I wondered how best to deal with his unresponsiveness. Hoping he would soon start talking, I waited him out, but his silence persisted.
       His passivity increased my nervousness that if I couldn’t engage him in conversation, I’d fail my first solo induction meeting. I figured my best strategy was to follow Kimberly’s advice to just wing it.
       “Tyrone, since no one forced you to come, there must be a reason why you’re here.” Affirming my comment, his head nodded up and down but no words came out of his mouth. "Are you always so talkative?”
       Everyone laughed. Tyrone smiled. Finally for the first time during this meeting I felt hopeful.
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Of all the samples on this blog, this one resembles a complete rewrite more than the others. The author acknowledged that the notes and diaries on which he based his draft were not necessarily written with future publication in mind, even though he already had a literary bent when working on them. I took the author's story--thought by thought, moment to moment--and wrote it in a novelistic way so that readers would be drawn in from the beginning and stick with it all the way through. Here's my edit, and the way it was published:

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       The inductees were already in the room when I arrived, all of them hardcore heroin addicts. The ten of them—six scruffy men and four doleful women—had entered from the side street. They ranged in age from twenty to thirty. Four were Caucasian, three Puerto Rican, and three black. A few sat on hard, wobbly wooden chairs and the others settled in on the floor. It occurred to me that either option—uncomfortable seats or cement—were not unfamiliar to these people at all. Perhaps that helped foster for them some odd sense of security.
       The first addict on whom I focused was a guy named Tyrone. He was a tall, twenty-year-old near-skeleton of a man. I sensed an instant connection with him, despite our significant disparities: I was short, he was tall; I grew up in the comfortable middle-class, he was raised in a squalid lower-class tenement; I had been immersed in lifelong learning, he lacked any formal education (though he was obviously very intelligent); I was white, he was black.
       “Tyrone, what motivated you to come here today?” I asked after I finished my opening statement. He sat silently and stared at the blank wall.
       I chose to wait him out. His determination to remain mute was as strong as mine was to hang on. For a while it seemed to be a standoff. I couldn’t let that happen.
       “Tyrone,” I said, “no one forced you to come here. So there must be a reason why you did. What is it? What’s the reason?”
       His head nodded ever so slightly, merely to acknowledge that he had heard the question. But that’s as far as the acknowledgement went. Still no words came out of his mouth.
       “Are you always so talkative?” I asked.
       Everyone laughed. Tyrone smiled. Hope returned.
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SIX

A young man from a foreign country told me that he has wanted to be writer from the time he was a child. He had no experience as an author, but wrote a draft of a short espionage thriller called "K5" (which I convinced him to retitle "The K5 Conspiracy") which did in fact have an intriguing plot and the one-the-edge,, paranoiac atmosphere reminiscent of a number of notable books in this genre. Here are his original two opening paragraphs.
 

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       In the middle of the road, at day time everyone staring, screaming loud, with their arms around the heads. I was on the bike heading to work, as usual, but my eyes and mind couldn’t let me keep biking as I was so curious about what happening on the other side of the road.  So I decided to take a look.

       I parked my bike on the street and I walked through the crowd. Once I got closer to the crowd, it was not only the crowd, but the cops were all over the street, securing. So I kept urging through the crowd, it seemed like no one care as their eyes are focused on what’s there, I couldn’t yet see. I finally got at the front row. “Ooh my God,” I screamed. My whole body got froze, and I could not move. My legs got numb. I felt nauseous, throwing up, and I crying like a little baby.

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To the extent possible, I kept his scenes as he envisioned them, and maintained his sense of action and confusion--but I did so by rewriting at least 75 percent of his original copy, thereby turning these opening chapters into something far more in line with what American readers are used to and will find compelling. Here are my two edited opening paragraphs.
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             In the middle of the road, everyone was staring, screaming loudly, their arms wrapped around their heads like cocoons. It was daytime, and I was on my bicycle on the way to work, as usual, but neither my eyes nor my mind would let me ride safely because of how curious I became about what was happening on the other side of the road. I decided to take a look. 
                I parked my bicycle on the side of the street and jointed the crowd. In addition to all the onlookers, there were many police officers all around, trying to secure the area. I looked around. Everyone's eyes were focused on something that I still could not see. I finally worked my way to the front. "Oh my God!" I screamed. My body froze.  I was unable to move. My legs went numb. I felt nauseous, a moment away from throwing up, and I began to cry like a baby.

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"My book project was relatively complex, with a specific purpose and audience. As such, the language and tone was more functional than eloquent, which I knew would require skill, patience, and resourcefulness. Joel came through on all three. On time, and on point."
--Rick Chapman, Managing Editor, Softlettter

"Joel is the best editor I know--high praise from someone who's also a writer and editor. He can handle any type of work, and is insightful, inventive, and great fun to work with."
--Rosemarie Monaco, President, Group M Marketing Communications 
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                          There is information below about rates and policies. You can always send an email to 

                                               JoeltheWriter@comcast.net to ask any questions at all.  

                                                        


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                                                           Here are some of the books I have edited:

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Never underestimate the power of good writing. For most people, that means never underestimate the value of good editing. When the writing is good, it shows that the author has passion, intelligence, dedication, professionalism, experience, enthusiasm, ingenuity and commitment. By contrast, bad writing shows only sloppiness and indifference. Good writing must be crisp, concise, impactful and error-free. In today’s digital world, anything that's written—even if it’s not in a print book—can last forever and end up defining you, your skill and your work for the rest of time! Make sure that it is well edited before you publish.

I use a per-page rate which is highly competitive with all other book editing services. With a per-page rate you know exactly what you will be expected to pay, regardless of how much editing is ultimately required or how many back-and-forth discussions we have to do via email. 

 Here's how it works. First, via email you send me three pages of your manuscript, along with some additional information that I will ask for as soon as you contact me. This step serves two purposes: One, it will help me determine the per-page rate (based on the extent of editing I determine will be required), and two, it will help you determine if you would like to me to be your editor. How? Because I will edit those three pages for free and email them back to you. That way you can decide if my editing style meets your needs and expectations. (Please make sure your document is double-spaced with 12-point Times-New Roman type.) If it's a go, then you will email the entire manuscript to me (double-spaced, 12-point). When I've completed the first half, I will send it back to you, request half the payment, and then get to work on the second half. You'll be asked to complete payment when you receive the edited second half back from me. Write to me at Joel@JoeltheWriter.com with questions or for more information.

Payment is either via PayPal or a personal check mailed to my office address. There is no limit on how much work I have to do in order to get the job done (and that includes emails back and forth for questions and clarifications). The rate never changes. What's more, I am happy to discuss ideas and suggestions on the marketing & promotion of your book even after it's published. That's part of the rate! It's an extra value built in.

Write to me at JoeltheWriter@comcast.net and let's get started. _______________________________________________________ 

"Joel has the ability to polish any editorial project so that it sparkles. He makes it look easy, which makes us look good."
--Kate Sirignano, President, Image Marketing Consultants


"When Joel polishes my novellas and short stories, his turnaround time is reliable and he retains the original message and feeling of all my work. I highly recommend him for any literary project."
--Robertson Tirado, author & filmmaker

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